Here are the main screen shots of the presentation...If need be of seeing more of the slides email me and i can get it back to you.Comments will be made on your posts (Carly, Jonathan, Kate, to let you know
The mind map maybe be a good starting point. Right now though, there is just too much information. I think you should pick one direction and go with it.
Also I'm having a little bit of trouble figuring out what the format is exactly but it looks like a brochure of some sort. I know you're really good at making books, maybe you can find a nice way to make an interactive book.
They way you are beginning to organize elements and your use of hierarchy are effective.
I understood that your mind map was not an proposal, but it looks like it would make a good interactive narrative. What i think you should do is mind map your conversation with your partner and go with that, explaining his background with brewing beer and how he could not get a way from that. Also, how he didn't really change much through his 2nd postcard. They way you make mind maps is always visually appealing to me, and it would be a good way to annotate. Just keep it simple.... (not too simple) :) If i think of anything else I'll blog about it.
I understood what your proposals were but I liked the idea of the mind-map as an interactive. That way you have some control along with the user having some control.
Maybe doing a mind-map into an interactive brochure. Also, it would show how you work as a designer and how others work and since it is for designers then you should make it after your work habits.
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Jessica
A few things about your presentation.
The mind map maybe be a good starting point. Right now though, there is just too much information. I think you should pick one direction and go with it.
Also I'm having a little bit of trouble figuring out what the format is exactly but it looks like a brochure of some sort. I know you're really good at making books, maybe you can find a nice way to make an interactive book.
They way you are beginning to organize elements and your use of hierarchy are effective.
I understood that your mind map was not an proposal, but it looks like it would make a good interactive narrative.
What i think you should do is mind map your conversation with your partner and go with that, explaining his background with brewing beer and how he could not get a way from that. Also, how he didn't really change much through his 2nd postcard.
They way you make mind maps is always visually appealing to me, and it would be a good way to annotate. Just keep it simple.... (not too simple) :)
If i think of anything else I'll blog about it.
I took notes during class about your presentation.
The idea of color coding and highlights is good
You should pick a metaphor and go with that. :)
I understood what your proposals were but I liked the idea of the mind-map as an interactive. That way you have some control along with the user having some control.
Maybe doing a mind-map into an interactive brochure. Also, it would show how you work as a designer and how others work and since it is for designers then you should make it after your work habits.
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