- the title is very legible and easy to understand. -connection lines might be lighter for understanding further away -use of icons are very nice
how to survive- look at putting yellow type ontop of red image, it's hard to read. is the last thing supposed to be number 7? Look at the wording on that point
under that in the bear section "if YOUR not careful" your should be you're (you are) -try walking slowly (away)
don't run ever away (don't ever run away)
under economy, up the smallest point size, even close it's hard to read, especially the dark text under the tree
inadequate is spelled wrong under the scouts slogan
2-3rds down that column, there needs to be a space between (posters;collection)
firewatchers needs a space (fire watchers) ((Right above the dotted line in scouts column)
Moleskin- What is moleskin(? )It is simply
common edible forest plants is very illegible, need to lighten it up
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- the title is very legible and easy to understand.
-connection lines might be lighter for understanding further away
-use of icons are very nice
how to survive- look at putting yellow type ontop of red image, it's hard to read. is the last thing supposed to be number 7? Look at the wording on that point
under that in the bear section "if YOUR not careful" your should be you're (you are)
-try walking slowly (away)
don't run ever away (don't ever run away)
under economy, up the smallest point size, even close it's hard to read, especially the dark text under the tree
inadequate is spelled wrong under the scouts slogan
2-3rds down that column, there needs to be a space between (posters;collection)
firewatchers needs a space (fire watchers) ((Right above the dotted line in scouts column)
Moleskin- What is moleskin(? )It is simply
common edible forest plants is very illegible, need to lighten it up
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