Backpack still has a bit too much noise/detail. Looks a bit like a 'ham'. The flames need work too, they are not matching the rest of the system. And there is not cohesion amongst the three pieces. Also, looks a bit copy-and-pasted since they are all so similar in form. Band-aid is legible, but needs an outline treatment to match the others. Bear and rain are spot-on. Concentrate on making the others as strong.
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Backpack still has a bit too much noise/detail. Looks a bit like a 'ham'. The flames need work too, they are not matching the rest of the system. And there is not cohesion amongst the three pieces. Also, looks a bit copy-and-pasted since they are all so similar in form. Band-aid is legible, but needs an outline treatment to match the others. Bear and rain are spot-on. Concentrate on making the others as strong.
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